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Gone (Story/Skye’s last memory)

[spoiler]Okay... so this is the final memory I plan to post, at least for now. I wanted to post this [i]a lot[/i] sooner, reasons being some crazy things happening in real life, having to organize some future plans for these stories, and... a week long ban for accidentally saying the forbidden word you find in one’s armor. *embarrassed laugh* I still plan on hosting an RP, hopefully soon, and there will be more information on that when I post it. For now, I hope you enjoy this memory of Skye as it shows what happened before she and her brother ended up in Offtopic. As I am drawing near the last battle between Errol and Skye, I would be very grateful for any criticisms in my writing [i]as well as[/i] my roleplaying, simply because I want my RPs to be enjoyable! This story is a tad longer than I had anticipated, so there will be a second post below to finish it up. Much thanks![/spoiler] Skye’s leg armor clanked softly together as she walked briskly down the stone corridor, her helmet tucked under her arm and her hybrid weapon hooked over her shoulder as it always seemed to be. She looked down at her vambraces and grinned excitedly. Though they were, like the rest of her armor, of a simple design, they held technology that would give her the ability to cloak out of sight for a short period of time. She believed that all of her experiments had finally led to success, and she was on her way out of the laboratory to test her work in the daylight. Then she passed by an open doorway and paused her stride. The sliding doors weren’t normally left open, especially to that particular room, and when she glanced back she found her brother hunched over his usual desk. The brunette bit her lower lip as concern quickly replaced her curiosity. It had been nearly five years since the two siblings had last spoken in the same tight-knit way they used to. Once Errol started working on his project, a rift had grown between them, and despite Skye’s efforts conversation became very limited. He distanced himself more over time, and she eventually stopped trying. She believed for the longest time that her brother simply needed to organize his thoughts on his own, but it had gone on far too long. What would Lyle say if he saw his children ignoring one another as they were? With that question in her mind, Skye slipped into the room. It wasn’t as large as some of the other chambers of the laboratory, nor was it as full. The most interesting object within was a large, run-down machine on the far side which appeared to be connected to a pair of platforms of steel and glass tucked into alcoves on either side of it. She contemplated its unknown purpose a little longer, when Errol’s voice sounded from where he stood. “Sneaking up on me again?” Skye whipped around, mind racing as she suddenly doubted her decision. “I, uh, sorry! Now is probably not a good time. I can come back later.” “No, I’m glad you’re here.” He turned to face her, and her fears were unexpectedly met with his smile. However, dark circles sat beneath his eyes, contrasted by skin that was more pale than what was natural for him. It was a wonder that he had even taken the time to keep his jaw cleanly shaved. He looked at her up and down. “You’ve been busy.” “Oh, um… you mean the armor? I just wanted to try something new.” She sighed. “Errol, about why I came here. I’m worried about you. I—” He furrowed his brow and interrupted her with a scoff. “Worried? Why should you be worried?” “We’ve hardly spoken for a really long time, and I miss when we used to talk. Are you all right?” “Aye, of course I’m all right! They’re finally done!” He held out a pair of gloves. Skye stared at them blankly. “So you’ve… finished practicing your sewing technique?” He chuckled and shook his head. “No. Well, that too, just watch! You’ll love this!” Errol slipped the gloves on, revealing the silvery disks fastened to their backs in the bright lights overhead. He held up his hands waist-high, and the disks glowed crimson. A low humming soon followed, and Skye became aware of the deep leather pouches that hung from his belt. To her astonishment, from them burst thousands of tiny red beads. More of the beads than she thought could possibly fit in the pouches continued to pour down Errol’s legs. She took a step back as they gathered together and moved as one, mimicking the careful motions of their master’s hands. Even though they rolled slowly and almost idly around the room, something told her that their full potential had not yet been revealed. They looked heavy, with the power to crush and break. The amount of study and skill it must have taken to fabricate them took her breath away. “They’re—they’re amazing! What are they?” “I’ve decided to call them Atoms,” he replied quietly, admiring his own handiwork. “They do whatever I ask of them, move into whatever form I desire, and with nothing more than a wave of my hand.” Skye looked up at him questioningly. With every word his voice became deeper and his gaze upon the ‘Atoms’ darker, though his smile remained. Something about it sent a chill up her spine. “What are these… ‘Atoms’ for?” “To get rid of it all. I thought you knew.” “No, I didn’t. Get rid of what?” He gave her an odd look. “The corruption, Skye! Don’t you see it? Father always said that we lived in a good and just place, but over time after his death I realized it’s everywhere; in the city, the leadership, even hiding in the wilderness! I have to get rid of it because no one else will.” “W-what? No, you—” she stammered, taken aback. “Y-you can’t be serious.” “I’m perfectly serious! The Atoms just need to be adjusted and refined a wee bit more, and then we can clean our homeland of it and find the men who killed my father. Come with me! Together, we can avenge him and keep anything like that from happening again. Don’t you want that? Don’t you want those men to be caught?” “Aye, I do, but not like this! Father taught us to use weapons to defend ourselves; to defend each other! We shouldn’t abuse—” “Like you were so good at defending him when the time came,” Errol snapped, and the expression on his features hardened with growing impatience. “It took me more time to realize it, but you let him die. Why? Did you panic again, like you always do? Afraid to use what he taught you when he [i]needed[/i] you? Were you even trying?!” Skye briefly froze at the cruel blow he had made, unable to suppress the guilt that rose within her. “I tried! I promise you, I tried! I didn’t want for any of this to happen. If I could make up for it I would! I’m sorry!” “Andrew’s cross, I’m giving you an opportunity to make up for it! And I want to forgive you, but you have to chose a side. Help me.” She was indeed tempted to accept his offer. She desired nothing more than to be with her brother, and to atone for her mistakes, but everything within her warned against it. Having an angry heart for bloodshed would not honor Lyle and all that he strove to teach them. Her gaze met his sadly, and Skye shook her head. “I can’t.” The Atoms swirled behind Errol, and he took a step forward threateningly. “If you don’t come with me you’re going against me. Think about what you are saying!” “I [i]am[/i] with you! I [i]am[/i] on your side, and that’s why I’m telling you to please reconsider! This isn’t what father would have wanted!” “How can you be so certain? You aren’t even truly his daughter. I’ve come too far to turn back now, and I won’t let anyone get in my way, not even you!” Skye felt her eyes burning with hot tears at his words, and she let out a trembling breath in preparation for what she was to say. “It’s too late. I am already in your way. I can’t stand to watch you fall like this, and I won’t let you go so easily.”

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  • Errol glared at her hatefully, and they stood in unbearable silence. His fingers twitched in anticipation, and the Atoms jerked in response. Skye’s muscles tensed, waiting patiently, hoping that he would realize that he was wrong. But it soon became clear that he refused to change course. He threw his hand out, and a wave of Atoms came tumbling towards her. With practiced speed she was ready to dodge out of their way and slip on her helmet as they smashed into a wall. Their pressure caused it to crack and rubble to fall. She drew out her bow, and with a quick twist it split and transformed into twin battle-ready daggers. Then an all too familiar feeling crept up on her. A worry, a fear, a panic, the very same that she felt right before Lyle died and she let herself forget her training, and she couldn’t restrain it. The Atoms pulled away from the wall, and by their wielder’s command they chased after her again, bumping into the machine and leaving a large dent in its frame. She turned to flee, but there was nowhere to go. As she leapt to the side to avoid another attack, she glanced down at her vambraces. It was now or never, though this was not the field test that she had wanted. She raised them up and tapped them together. Errol stood dumbfounded as she blinked completely out of sight. He heard swift footsteps approaching him, followed by the feeling of two invisible fists punching into either side of his face one after the other. He stumbled backwards and into the machine, and his elbow unintentionally pushed against a lever. The control panel suddenly lit up, though he paid little attention to it as Skye reappeared in front of him. She made a move to stab an exposed glove, but in her fear she hesitated, and thus allowed him just enough time to recover. He lifted his hand to grab her wrist before her blade could make contact, and repeated the block as she attempted to use her other. Their struggle continued for what seemed like forever, though only minutes had passed. In the process, the Atoms smashed into the lights on the ceiling, leaving the room lit only by the dim glow radiating from the machine. It was difficult for Skye to get around the new weapon, and every time she found an opening, she felt her panic hold her back. She couldn’t stand the thought of hurting him, even in self defense, until finally she once again left herself open for a blow. The Atoms pushed her forcefully towards the machine, and with a firm grasp still on her daggers, she instinctively reached out to steady herself. Her arm fell upon the control panel, pressing in buttons and flipping switches. The mechanism suddenly began to hum and rattle, but before Skye could react to it, she felt the Atoms wrap around her body, and she knew it was over. As they grabbed her, they punched through the panel, and golden sparks were flung in all directions. With a swipe of Errol’s hands, they threw her into one of the room’s recesses, and she hit a steel-covered wall head first. She fell onto the platform limply, and her daggers clinked against the glass. Errol watched her intently, and she didn’t move to rise again. She was still alive, but she was left unconscious. He slowly began to approach to finish her when a distorted computerized voice rang from the machine. “U-u-unit prepared. Destin-in-ination: Offtopic. Tel-tel-tel-teleportation in three sec-sec-seconds.” Errol’s eyes widened at the words, and he rushed towards Skye, his Atoms following close beside him. Then the platform shone a brilliant white light, and the voice sounded again. “Teleporting…” “[i]No[/i]!” However, before he could reach her, the light flashed, and the room went dark. The laboratory was left in eerie silence, once more devoid of life. The two had completely vanished, and a day later Skye woke in a strange land with nothing but her bow, her armor, a headache, and fragmented memories.

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    • Edited by Element Ninja: 8/6/2020 7:22:25 PM
      👍 Also, how do you make “selected answers”?

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      • bump

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      • I hope I get some time to read this later. For now here’s a bump!

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      • So that's how she wound up here... You did a really good job of the subtle details of Errol not being alright. It slowly became obvious just how sick in the mind he had become as the talk went on.

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      • We draw closer and closer to [i]the final conflict[/i]

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        • Looking good!

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          • Wow. That was...intense.

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          • *reads first post* Me: Very well done. OP: BUT WAIT THERES MORE! Me: wait what?

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            • Edited by f3: 8/5/2020 8:34:46 AM
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              Sk[b][u]y[/u][/b]e’s leg arm[b][u]o[/u][/b]r clanked softly together as she walked briskly down the stone corridor, her helmet t[b][u]u[/u][/b]cked under her arm and her hybrid weapon hooked over her [b][u]s[/u][/b]houlder as it al[b][u]w[/u][/b]ays s[b][u]e[/u][/b]emed to be. She looked down [b][u]at[/u][/b] [b][u]her[/u][/b] vambraces [b][u]and[/u][/b] gr[b][u]i[/u][/b]nned excitedly. Though they were, like the rest of her [b][u]a[/u][/b]rmor, of a s[b][u]i[/u][/b]mple desig[b][u]n[/u][/b], [b][u]t[/u][/b]hey held [b][u]t[/u][/b]echnology th[b][u]a[/u][/b]t would give her the abi[b][u]l[/u][/b]ity to cloa[b][u]k[/u][/b] out of s[b][u]i[/u][/b]ght for a short period of time. She believed that all of her experime[b][u]n[/u][/b]ts had finally led to success, and she was on her way out of the la[b][u]bo[/u][/b]ratory to test her work in the daylight. Then she passed by an open doorway and pa[b][u]u[/u][/b]sed her s[b][u]t[/u][/b]ride. The sliding doors weren’t norm[b][u]a[/u][/b]lly left open, espe[b][u]c[/u][/b]ially to that particular r[b][u]oo[/u][/b]m, and when she [b][u]g[/u][/b]lanced back she found her brother hunched over h[b][u]i[/u][/b]s usual desk. The brunette bit her lower lip as concern quickl[b][u]y[/u][/b] replaced her curi[b][u]o[/u][/b]sity. It had been nearly five years since the two siblings had last spoken in the same tight-knit way they [b][u]u[/u][/b]sed to. Once Errol st[b][u]a[/u][/b]rted working on his project, a rift had grown [b][u]b[/u][/b]etween them, and desp[b][u]i[/u][/b]te Skye’s efforts conversation became very limited. He distanced himself more over time, and she eventually stopped tryin[b][u]g[/u][/b]. She believed for the longest time that her brother simply needed to organize his thoughts on his own, but it had gone on far too long. What would [b][u]L[/u][/b]yle s[b][u]a[/u][/b]y if he saw his childre[b][u]n[/u][/b] ignoring one another as they were? With that question in her min[b][u]d[/u][/b], Skye sl[b][u]i[/u][/b]pped into the room. It w[b][u]a[/u][/b]sn’t as large as some of the other chambers of the laboratory, nor was [b][u]i[/u][/b]t as full. The most i[b][u]nt[/u][/b]eres[b][u]t[/u][/b]ing object within w[b][u]a[/u][/b]s a [b][u]l[/u][/b]arge, run-down machine on the far side which appeared to be connected to a pair of platforms of steel and glass tuc[b][u]k[/u][/b]ed [b][u]in[/u][/b]to alcoves on either side of it. She contemplated its unknown purpose a little longer, when Errol’s voice sounded from where he stood. “Sneaking up on me again?” Skye whipped around, mind racing as she suddenly dou[b][u]b[/u][/b]ted her decision. “I, uh, s[b][u]o[/u][/b]rry! Now is probably not a good time. I can come back later.” “No, I’m glad yo[b][u]u[/u][/b]’re here.” He [b][u]t[/u][/b]urned to fa[b][u]c[/u][/b]e her, and her fears were unexpectedly met with his smile. H[b][u]o[/u][/b]wever, dark circles sat beneath his eyes, c[b][u]o[/u][/b]ntrasted by skin that was more pa[b][u]l[/u][/b]e than what was natural for him. It was a wonder that he had even taken the time to keep his [b][u]j[/u][/b]aw cleanly [b][u]s[/u][/b]haved. He looked at her up and down. “You’ve been busy.” “Oh, um… you m[b][u]e[/u][/b]an the armor? I just want[b][u]e[/u][/b]d to try something new.” She sighed. “Errol, about why I ca[b][u]me[/u][/b] here. I’m worried [b][u]a[/u][/b]bou[b][u]t[/u][/b] you. I—” He furrowed his brow and in[b][u]t[/u][/b]errupted [b][u]he[/u][/b]r with a scoff. “Worried? Why should you be worried?” “We’ve h[b][u]a[/u][/b]rdly spoken for a really long t[b][u]i[/u][/b]me, and I miss when we used to talk. Are you all [b][u]r[/u][/b]ight?” “Aye, of course I’m all right! They’re finally done!” He held out a [b][u]p[/u][/b]air [b][u]o[/u][/b]f gloves. Skye sta[b][u]r[/u][/b]ed a[b][u]t[/u][/b] them bl[b][u]a[/u][/b]nkly. “So you’ve… finished prac[b][u]t[/u][/b]icing your sewing technique?” He chuck[b][u]le[/u][/b]d [b][u]a[/u][/b]nd [b][u]s[/u][/b]hook his head. “No. Well, [b][u]t[/u][/b]ha[b][u]t[/u][/b] too, just [b][u]w[/u][/b]atch! You’ll love this!” [b][u]E[/u][/b]rrol slipped the gloves o[b][u]n[/u][/b], revealing the silvery disks fas[b][u]t[/u][/b]ened to their backs in the bright lights overhead. He held up his hands waist-high, and the disks glowed crimson. A low humming soon followed, and Sk[b][u]y[/u][/b]e became aware of the deep [b][u]l[/u][/b]eather p[b][u]ou[/u][/b]ches that hung from h[b][u]is[/u][/b] bel[b][u]t[/u][/b]. To he[b][u]r[/u][/b] astonishm[b][u]e[/u][/b]nt, from them burst thous[b][u]a[/u][/b]nds of [b][u]t[/u][/b]iny red beads. [b][u]M[/u][/b]or[b][u]e[/u][/b] of the beads than she thought cou[b][u]l[/u][/b]d poss[b][u]i[/u][/b]bly fit in the pouches continued to pour down Errol’s legs. She too[b][u]k[/u][/b] a st[b][u]e[/u][/b]p b[b][u]a[/u][/b]ck as they gathered together and moved as one, mimicking the careful motions of their master’s hands. Even though they rolled slowly and almost idly around the room, something told her that their full [b][u]p[/u][/b]otential had not yet been [b][u]r[/u][/b]evealed. They looked heavy, w[b][u]i[/u][/b]th the power to crush a[b][u]n[/u][/b]d break. The amount of study and skill it must have taken to fabri[b][u]c[/u][/b]at[b][u]e[/u][/b] them took her breath away. “They’re—they’re amazing! What are they?” “[url=https://youtu.be/I3KOywRHKgg]And that’s my sweet brother, Numpsay[/url],” he replied quietly, admiring his own handiwork.

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              • Whoa this is good!

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              • ... That was on odd turn I wasn't expecting, I don't quite know what I think, I may have to come back to this... [spoiler]not included in the DLC[/spoiler]

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