again, not denying the thirst. and again, how can you say it is poorly written when the sentence structure and punctuation is perfect. not to mention that i make and support a clear point, whether you agree with the point or not. you're not going to tell me. i have a plaque on my wall and transcripts and achievements to back up my writing ability. why in the hell would some idiot on an internet forum who cannot point out one error's opinion mean anything to me? i do not capitalize the first word in each sentence, but this is intentional. it is my writing style. but it is far from poorly written, my friend