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Edited by Royal Blade: 8/29/2015 3:28:26 PM
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Recon-Part 1

Commander Zavala looked at Cayde-6 trying to determine whether he was joking or not. "You're serious?" "Very." "Well alright then all we need to do is convince the speaker." "Already done." "You've been prepared for this then?" "For quite some time Commander." "How do we find him." "One of my Hunters is guite good at finding people." "That would be?" "His name is Anon the Seeker but most of the Hunters call him Anon." "Do you trust him Cayde?" "No." The Commander sighed "Does he have a team ready?" "Yes." "Are they any good?" "That is for you to find out." "Very well then." Zavala looked at Ikora who had been sitting there quietly. Ikora simply nodded to him signaling she was on board. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Anon looked up at the team he had selected and began to doubt whether or not they were ready for this. He looked at Geyser in his bulky armor. He was an odd man but very clever. Geyser could have passes off as a warlock to most people because of his witty responses but he was a pure titan at heart. He looked away from Geyser and glanced at the other Hunter that was in their fireteam. The huntress' name was Truth. Now if it had been up to Anon he never would have picked Geyser for this mission but Zavala insisted that a titan was needed so Anon took Geyser along. Truth could care less about who was in their team as long as they got the mission done. Anon looked at them both again as a voice came over the speaker "ETA to drop off is 30 seconds." Geyser looked up and nodded signaling he was ready. Anon looked at truth to see if she was ready and sure enough she was more then prepared. "Alright here we go," said Anon as his vision turned white. When Anon's eyes adjusted to the sunlight he saw nothing but desert for miles around. The three Guardians started heading North and walked in silence for a few minutes before Anon spoke up and said "Remember team this is your ordinary scouting mission." Truth looked at Anon and said "At least that's what the Vanguard wants us to believe." Anon shot her a glance through his helmet "We don't have time for this, we've arrived." The three Guardians stood at the top of a tall sand dune overlooking an old outpost. "Alright, Geyser what do we do when we get to the outpost?" asked Anon. "We establish a link with the Tower by jamming either Vex or Cabal transmission," replied Geyser. "Good what do we do after that Truth?" Truth looked at Anon and said "We head to the coordinates latitude 250.029262, longitude 371.82620 and wait for Team 3 to meet up with us there." Before Anon could say anything a Vex cloud formed at the bottom of the dune. Geyser smiled and said "This is where the fun begins." End of Part 1 [b] This is my first story so don't judge to harshly but I do welcome feedback and criticism.[/b] PART 2: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/118734029/0/0

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  • You've started off well enough, but I am going to tell you the exact same thing that I told, Photon. It's a mental roadblock for me when I come across other peoples' tag names as character names. I'm just so used to seeing them pop up in the chats, that I automatically associate their names with their behavioural patterns and I can't get over it. It's a little distracting. So, my only real feedback, so far, is to change the names to something unique. Anyway, it's good, so keep going. *Note* And no, I don't care that I'm not in it nor am I jealous. Just throwing that out there before I get attacked for it.

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