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1/6/2015 8:06:53 PM
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Whoops. Fixed! With a single dot. Added a semicolon there. The word repetition was intentional, simulating someone rushing through what they were saying. It was awkward to read the way it was, though. Needed something heavier than a comma to show the pause after the first one. Good eye! Thanks for the feedback! [spoiler]And if you notice anything else,[i] please[/i] let me know. [/spoiler]
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