"I eagerly stalk the battle fields destroying agents of darkness from any range."
This part just sounds a little well stupid
Try something like "I stalk the battle fields destroying agents of darkness with bullet and blade"
"defending those unable to defend themselves."
This makes them sound more Robin Hood then Crusader of Light. Why not just get rid of it.
Finally please change "knowledge bearers" to something else, anything else.
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How bout no