remember this intro is WIP [spoiler]The universe was just nothing but darkness, from that darkness they came to be about. One that destroyed and one that created. From them the universe was able to be brought back to life. They were from the old worlds, which died from an unknown force. A force that still is a much of a threat to the universe. These two races are not the only ones that survived. There are others that live. Rebuilding their homes. But among them are three prime evils. A race that travels through the universe killing anything in their path, they are called the soulless. They are on a quest of ruling the cosmos.Another race that is rebuilding its army on Its home world. In hopes of being strong once again Before the old worlds died, they ruled most of the universe with an iron fist. Their name is predocs. the last one which is in hiding. Where no one knows but when they return the universe will once again know their name. And their name is the broken ones[/spoiler]

I'm guessing the story revolves around the broken ones? Or am I wrong? For a WIP, it's not bad. It has solid ground.

the story will revolve around all three and three more evils with in the universe. but it will also be about exploring the universe. the broken ones, soul less and predocs all have history of how they came about. why are the soul less , soul less? how can machine and organic metaril be together from the start? and what broke the broken ones ? all these questions would be answered in a novel i would write about a space explorer. all three are a danger, but i will focus on one at a time. the broken ones will be the first. and thank you

So is it one explorer discovering all of these or is it a new protagonist every single time it focuses on one of the three factions?

a new protagonist with the three factions. but there are six evil races in total. star explore is the fourth highest race, the next one is star lord.

Do any of them meet? Or does that not happen?

they will come a cross each others path. and greet. share tips and new magics they have found. fighting the evil races, what they find and what old secrets are left behind. so far this is universe 10, 90 trillion years from the very first universe. [spoiler]Themes : human,strong and hopeful ranks: star trooper: star guard: star commander: star commanders are the ones that take over their enemies with smarts over physical strength, though they are able to fight star explorer: star explorers are higher than star commander. they are the ones going out and looking for new worlds. star explores are marked like the other ranks but what makes it clear that they are a star explore, are the wings on their back and the ability to change eye colors. star explores are able to use magic like a star commander and guard but their skills are more refined. star lord: star lords are the highest of command. They hold the same abilities of a star explorer expert a few. Star lords are able to link.up with others. Giving them commands with their mind. They also are able to change matter to what they please. As well as teleport. Star lords can not however change their eye color, they usually have dark red eyes or dark grey eyes. star lords usual have swords when going into combat. they have to go into the wilds and find their sword. which will call their second name, when they find it, they must bring the sword together and make it whole. [/spoiler]

I gotcha. This goes pretty in depth in terms of little details as well.

yes, i plan on making five novels with art work in them. they will be graphic novel style mixed with normal novel style. as well as a art book.

That's pretty cool. That'll take up lots of your time.

Yeah. Plan to spend ten years on it

Not the only one. Crawl out from your rock.

sorry. i have not played any first person shooters besides halo with good lore. RPG games always have good lore. bungie is the only one to have good lore.

If you haven't played any other first person shooters other than Halo, then how can you even say that other developers don't have good stories and lore? That's a terrible argument.