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Edited by FadedPanda: 5/13/2014 12:40:48 AM
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Ooo, pretty good. I just got to say the anatomy is off so little that you wouldn't be able to tell if you were the artist in the heat.[happens to me all the god damn time] The eyes and nose should be a bit lowered, so that there is more space for the forehead. People very commonly forget that the forehead is a pretty large portion of the face. Also, with a lowered nose the nasal septim [part under the nasal tip] should be trimmed to fit the face. I understand this is a heavily stylized art work, so none of these points are negative, they are just for a bit of insight into realism or assistance. On another note the use of color is brings valuable atmosphere to the image. [Edit: If all these things are done you will also have to adjust the left side of her face to be a bit lower and the left jaw line to be at a little more angled down.]
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  • Aha yeah I noticed something was wrong after I finished the painting, but I was practicing one layer painting and I didn't want to go back and mess with it too much. Additionally I hadn't spent enough time away from it to identify what the problem really was. Thanks for the insight though :D

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  • Edited by FadedPanda: 5/13/2014 12:50:20 AM
    yea that's all good it doesn't really need fixing much. My problem is I always try to get too complicated with layers and all this fancy crap and it ends up taking me a week to finish a quarter of the painting..... [I always feel like a dic# when giving constructive criticism hahaha] [spoiler]sketch lyfe [/spoiler]

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  • No, it's cool, I am always down for some constructive criticism as long as the person doesn't seem to be trying to flat out insult me xD. I'll keep those things in mind. [spoiler] Honestly most of my drawings are sketches because my sketches look better than my finished works :c[/spoiler]

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