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4/7/2023 8:38:16 PM
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So I've seen a lot of these, haven't read any of them, but I laud you for all the effort. One thing that might draw more attention is to include a short little premise at the header of each post, something that gives an idea of what the story is about. (I know you're limited on room with bungie.net's character limit, but just a thought.)
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Thanks. What would be a good example of a premise? The example doesn't have to relate to my story.
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Edited by SometimesIDrinkCoffee: 4/7/2023 10:18:50 PMI can give it my best shot. This will be the premise of a story I was working on, then subsequently abandoned: [i]The Nikral are the protectors of Sacrin and the peaceful Kel, a soft race who are genetically predisposed to cower at the idea of violence, are subject to their harsh rule. The Nikral's lore repels colossal creatures at the edge of Sacrin, a service in exchange for loyalty. But a rift opens between worlds and a man comes through. He is a Kel, but he does not shy from the spilling of blood. In fact, he is quite proficient at it. Armed with strange lore equal to the Nikral's and tech to match, he sets events in motion that could spell doom for them all.[/i]
