Nil leaving a note for herself immediately made me think of Prey. It's fun seeing the same character in different states of mind trying to talk to themselves. Obviously, it can't be done directly, but still fun.
I like how she just crawls under a table at some point. Like, she doesn't know when she does it, just suddenly she's under the table. It's such a silly little detail, but I like it.
I think the only complaint I would have is her reasoning for going into murder-mode isn't really explained. It's just kind of mentioned like it's a normal thing that's to be expected. Granted, they have had this conversation however many times already, but I do feel like I'm missing something there.
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I also tried to get that feel with the randomly standing up onto the chair but I couldn't really find the words to express it properly. As for the murder mode bit, don't read my diary!
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Oh, haha, I didn’t even notice that the first time! I had read it as her stumbling out of the chair she was sitting in, and the golem stopped her from getting up for some reason. :p And don’t tell me what to do! I’ll use my nifty robot X-Ray vision to read it without you even knowing! . . . Or I would, if I was installed with X-Ray vision.