It was a bright day in the tower bazaar. The sun was shining through the ruins of the tower, the birds were singing, and it was calm and quiet.
“Just what I need. Some peace and quiet.” Commander said. “I couldn’t agree more” his ghost replied. “Let’s go check out New Monarchy’s place. I bet will find something there.”
After searching for hours they decided to stop. “Commander your going all twitchy again” said Captain Obvious. “Really? I didn’t know.” I said.
All of a sudden I was back in the parking lot of my grocery store. “I must be remembering this.” I went inside and saw someone bring in a big important looking box. “I wonder what that is.”
“Whoa...”Hay Captain Obvious up for a road trip?” I asked. “You remembered something didn’t you?” “Would I be asking if I didn’t?” “But Zavala said... I cut him off. “I know what Zavala said but I have to explore it!” “Fine.” Captain replies.
“Is there anything you can use to tell where it is?” “Well it’s nowhere near us. There’s trees, surrounding buildings, and... I can’t remember.” I say with sadness in my voice.
“Wait! I remember the street name!” As I punch in the coordinates. And we were off.
“This is it” As we approach an old building. “Any Fallen?” “Just a few.” Replied Captain obvious. I readied my last word and went in
After going through the main entrance I take a left into the break room. After several minutes of wondering through the building I make it to the stalk room
“Wait a minute!” Captain said “Your breaking Zavala”s rules because you remember a box from a grocery store? Are you kidding me?” “Look.” I replied “Yes it may just be a box from a store, but this is my home. So yes I came all this way to find a box.” Captain said nothing.
After a few minutes of silence and searching. “This is it.” I say nervously. I open the box and “Hey Captain, either my smell censors broke or I forgot to turn them back on, because that?” I say pointing to the box “That is vile!” As I pull out a half rotten box.
“Flapjacks! Literally?” “We went half way across the world for you to find a half rotting box of pancakes?!” “Flapjacks.” I correct him. “What a waste of time.” “I can’t believe you.” As Captain Obvious went back to the ship.
THEE END.
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I’m not much of a writer so sorry if there’s any missing or incorrect punctuation