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7/3/2020 1:41:41 AM
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[quote]Times have been rough, I wish I could help you...”
[i]I don’t reply.[/i]
“Come with me boy. Let me help you, I’ll get you some food and we can talk...” [i]He offers.[/i][/quote]
To me, these lines are weird and contradictory. One line ago, mysterious hunter man is saying he can't help, then proceeds to help anyway! Was the first one supposed to be in the past tense? If so, then it should be could've instead of could.
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Edited by NotZzephyr: 7/3/2020 2:06:39 AM[quote]Times have been rough, I wish I could help you...” [i]I don’t reply.[/i] “Come with me boy. Let me help you, I’ll get you some food and we can talk…”, [i]He offers.[/i][/quote] FTFY
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What the first meant is help mentally, as in protagonist have been through a lot. I suppose I could’ve made that more clear...hehe.
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I just saw the edit, and it's much better. That was a smart move removing help from the second line; it disassociates the two tyoes of help if you only use the word oncr.
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[quote]I just saw the edit, and it's much better. That was a smart move removing help from the second line; it disassociates the two tyoes of help if you only use the word oncr.[/quote] Yeah, thank you for pointing that out. After reading it again I see the problem.
