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Edited by Sûtek, Hive Prismaticist:
6/13/2020 1:39:40 AM
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NOT LATE! I hope....
Anyway, here’s what I managed to come up with.
[spoiler]It ain’t my best work, but it’s something.[/spoiler]
[url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wvX5tcTj5E4uJkPh-Hb_JnYK5yySaalmmp_d-veBEw/edit]Lunar Research[/url]
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The winner has been announced!
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Really? Where?!
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On the original post. Scroll up lol
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Oh....I uh....I knew that.....
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Edited by Grays_KS27: 6/13/2020 2:23:01 AM[quote]NOT LATE! I hope....[/quote] You beat the deadline by 2 hours, actually. Well done, and thanks for participating. Here’s my feedback, and if you feel like making some changes you’ve still got those 2 hours (Edit: well, 1 hour and 40 minutes now) Only one thing stuck out to me as a problem: It seemed you implied that Lilli blinked straight to Nessus. Blink is very short range, only a few meters. Not an all-powerful teleport. Maybe change the wording a little to make it clear she didn’t blink straight to Nessus. I liked the bit at the end of the two other Guardians tracking Lilli. That was a nice touch.
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Edited by Sûtek, Hive Prismaticist: 6/13/2020 3:29:11 AMI read somewhere that a Warlocks blink is traveling between space and time and such, and that, in theory, it could be used to travel anywhere. [spoiler]In lore, of course. The gameplay version is less effective than a Hunter not using triple jump...[/spoiler]
