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6/11/2020 5:46:37 AM
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The dialogue in this one especially was very good.
Cara's reaction is definitely understandable, one has to put the lives of their home and people first.
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I’m glad to hear that... this story isn’t exactly my favorite that I’ve written. Had a lot of issues with length, but it was getting so late I had to rush a bit and just get the main point across... I hate rushing my writing, lol. 🤦♀️ And yes, despite the rushing I really wanted to show Cara’s concern for her people as well as how Errol’s actions effect other people other than Skye and common thieves.
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Rushing a story is never fun. I've been surprised in the past at times when I'll write a story and rush it some, but then people seem to praise it as one of the better stories. It's funny how the author's and readers' perspectives can be so different.
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True. That’s why I appreciate having other people look at my work. Not because of the praise (though praise is encouraging), but because different pairs of eyes often see things that I miss etc.
