Ok, this is very good, yet there’s one noticeable error, it’s quick to notice.
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This [quote] The elevator doors opened and Ronin was faced with dozens of Fallen and a few Cabal prisoners. They all looked at him and immediately all the fallen cried out in anger. Out of the ju mble of clicks and screeches, Ronin could understand one sentence. [/quote]