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2/29/2020 7:44:35 AM
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Great job! Just work on the pacing a bit. Parts of the story seem very quick, which makes it hard to stay in the moment. Where are you going next with the story? The moon I take it?
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Edited by Silas Mori: 2/29/2020 1:02:05 PMYeah, the Moon, why’d you ask. Can you give me some information on where I should space out the story, and what parts seem faster than others in terms of pacing.
