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11/18/2019 2:43:54 PM
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Great job! A very amusing chapter.
[quote][i]Shadow’s Heart and the Judgment Kell?”[/i][/quote]
A fanfic about a fanfic within a fanfic?!
I see Sahvoz discovered the secret remaster of Shadowheart’s Page 3 lmao
[quote]SAHVOZ-88: “Hey, what did I say ‘bout the G word?[/quote]
BuT hIs NaMe Is GuArDiAn
Lol, well played
[quote]SAHVOZ-88: “I called you an Avatar looking egg-head because I thought I hung up?”[/quote]
Now [i]that’s[/i] funny. Good honesty, Sahvoz.
[quote]SAHVOZ-88: “I’m thinking something classic...”
VETRA: “Clone wars?”[/quote]
Wow, a Destiny Live Action reference and love for Star Wars at the same time.
“Impressive. Most impressive.”
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Edited by Sûtek, Hive Prismaticist: 3/7/2020 1:14:04 PMRight, I just spent the last ten minutes looking for a good Vader quote but found nothing, so take my thanks instead. Thanks, it’s nice getting feedback like this. Guess I’m getting better at my chapters, huh?
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[quote]I just spent the last then minutes looking for a good Vader quote but found nothing, so take my thanks instead.[/quote] When you search the internet but can’t find the right Darth Vader quote: “Your machines are insufficient.” —Darth Vader [quote]Thanks, it’s nice getting feedback like this. Guess I’m getting better at my chapters, huh?[/quote] It‘s probably mostly because of the Shadowheart joke. But I did like this chapter a lot. Perhaps it’s because you were more focused on comedy than plot this chapter. It can certainly be hard to entertain the reader when you focus on plot. You have been doing very well.
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Edited by Sûtek, Hive Prismaticist: 1/16/2020 12:13:45 AMNote to self, include everyone I know and joke plus ultra. Thanks for the feedback though, good to know people like my work even though I ain’t as famous as other people.
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"The Force is strong with this one."
