[quote]How much corny romance for the sake of character development is okay?[/quote]
None. Corny romance does not develop characters, or their relationship.
I would choose [i]either[/i]:
Humour
Romance
Character
But not all three.
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Adjusted the title to convey what I meant. The romance itself is ok, I’m just not sure if it’s ok [i]where i have it placed[/i] in the story.
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If it's well written romance, and it doesn't feel too out of place in the context, it should be okay.