Oh my god, honestly, RWBY for the win. More importantly though, I really both like and dislike the character concept. Let me explain. The idea of a character that has both been/is a Guardian, a Vex Mind, and partially (?) Taken is cool. But just at the same time it feels...for a lack of better words, and I apologize, but...stupid. I’m physically incapable of articulating this correctly, but here’s my analogy. Have you ever looked up or come across an OC for some fandom, where the OC is trying to do too much? Like, the character in question has all the powers of all of the good guys and all of the bad guys and everything, or some special power that has no explanation or doesn’t make sense within the universe? I know I have, and this is what this comes it comes off as to me, just in a much less extreme way. It’s cool to be a Taken and a Guardian and a Vex Mind, but it feels like the character is trying to do and be too much at once. And I know this is nitpicking and you don’t intend for this character to be your ultimate creation, but that comes off in the character's backstory as well. A Guardian...who happened to be fully Vexified (which is plausible, though we’ve never seen anything beyond Asher's arm and perhaps Kabr drinking the radiolaria from the Oracles in the VoG, so we don’t know exactly how that works), which the process also happened to render a Vex Mind yet still has remnants of his Light, and is [i]then[/i] partially but not completely Taken by Oryx, gaining Taken powers alongside the Vex and Guardian Ones. It’s too convoluted, and it’s too coincidental that all of these things would happen to the character and that they would retain all of those things. Then there’s also the lore logic behind it, like what are the ramifications of a Vex Mind having access to Light? Would the conversion process allow Guardians to keep their Light? Or their original personality and not belong to the Vex Collective, or later, follow the will of Oryx? How can the Light still exist in them if they were Taken? How can they be all of these things simultaneously?