Hi OP. You've posted this thread in #offtopic, which is for all things unrelated to Destiny. You're not likely to reach your intended audience or get good responses here, which would be a shame because this seems like something you've put a decent amount of effort into. To properly sort your post, and for your own benefit, you should edit your post and move it #destiny2 or maybe #community. You can do this, assuming you're on mobile, by clicking on your post, choosing the three dots, choosing [i]edit[/i], and then changing #offtopic to one of the aforementioned tags. Best of luck.