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originally posted in: Mission log entry .05
8/16/2017 7:02:05 AM
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[quote]I've been here for 5 days now, and have been able to survive off a few of the berries my ghost said we OK to eat. SIDE NOTE: Eating the fuzzy berries at night cause uncontrollable flatulence. But will taste like whatever your thinking of during the day. Water is everywhere but is undrinkable, It contains high traces of mercury and iron. My ships water supply is in tact for now. [/quote] I'll bite. Flatulence is pretty much nothing if you're living alone. Those berries would probably be the best you've ever tasted, but berries in particular wouldn't fill you up. Also, do berries even need fur for weather protection? They're not [i]that[/i] dependent on the weather, and even if they were, the fur would be highly unnecessary, as temperatures on Venus average 864°F. I can believe the fact that the berries have adapted to the climate, but those fuzzy berries shouldn't have even existed to begin with. The water on Venus would have evaporated, due to the intense heat, and would have instead be replaced with lava flows. However, we can assume that humanity has managed control the weather over time, but the timeframe where the project may have started to now is not nearly enough for the evolution of the "fuzzy berries." If this didn't happen, we can assume the waters have Vex Radiolarian Fluid mixed into it, where the Fluid may have leaked from crevices and holes leading from caves. Even so, how is the guardian alive, if he hasn't had water within 3 days? If you say his Ghost can resurrect him, what's the point of getting supplies in the first point, and water at that? Still, what if you were thinking of depression and anxiety during the day? That'll be one bad apple. Grammar could have been fixed. This looks like it was made on a whim, on a timeframe within 10-15 minutes.
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  • Honestly it was made on a whim. I'm not the best when it comes to grammar. I love to write and share my creative thinking with others especially when it comes to destiny. I love everything about it and only wanted to share what i felt like my story would be. Thanks For the feedback its greatly appreciated. Ill do my best to correct the grammar and i guess become more knowledgeable, but i'm not making any promises, i write how i speak i guess idk. :-( Thanks Though. sorry for the inconvenience.

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  • No problem man! Anything for an aspiring writer such as yourself!

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