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originally posted in:Destiny Fiction Producers
5/21/2017 1:21:13 AM
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You're definitely building suspense and thickening the plot with this chapter. Foxtrot's death seemed a little too emotional for the length of time we knew him, but I can understand its significance to Delta as he's trying to learn who he is. Liked the part of the Key Blade, that felt original and significant. Definitely one of the best chapters so far.
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Edited by Cyfer: 5/21/2017 1:32:26 AMI tried to make it emotional in the way that Delta just lost a brother he didn't even know he had. It's not terribly significant, but still emotionally scarring. The Key Blade was merely a tool through which I could introduce the moon as a super weapon. I knew I wanted to make the moon this way, and I saw Oryx use his blade in the same way, so I just put the two together.
