You describe the action well, and keep it gripping. What's Delta's number? And is the Ghost's name "Resurrection?" You may answer these later, but this is what comes to mind reading it up to this point.
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Believe it or not, I am twelve chapters in and I have yet to reveal Delta's number, but I promise I will, sooner than you think. The resurrection thing probably could have been better. It was meant to tell the other guardians that the ghost had a newly revived guardian on board