I like the idea of a female ghost, but you need to put a lot more emotion into how it sounds. If you're aiming for voice actor. It was flat and emotionless, like you were bored to be doing it. Reminded me of how Peter Dinklage sounded. If just for fun, it wasn't bad! There's a channel on YouTube that narrates the grimoire cards very well, check those out for some references on doing other voiceover work for other sections of the game, if that should interest you.