I'll give you this much: It's better than Dinklage. There are a few bits that could use more emotion, particularly the parts about being in Fallen territory could use a higher sense of urgency. But all in all, this brings up something that Bungie should take into consideration. Different Ghost voices and personalities. Even reading some of the grimoire cards, each Ghost is supposed to be unique. They even have names. So why is our Ghost just referred to as "Ghost"? Personally, I think they should look to Portal and Glados' Personality Cores for inspiration. Maybe not take it to Space Core extremes, but still.