Hey, guardian. Love these chapters. I want to suggest you make a table of contents for this story. Also, link the ToC at the end of each chapter so new readers won't have to jump through hoops to find the earlier chapters. I've been an avid reader since chapter 1, by now, those earlier chapters are lost. You could be missing out on alot of readers who aren't reading because they can't follow the story.
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Hey man, thanks again for the input - just wanted to give you a heads up I've got all the chapters linked up now and I've got a master post with the [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/218618986?sort=0&page=0]Table of Contents[/url]. And if you've got any friends you think might enjoy this story too, feel free to send 'em a link! :) https://www.bungie.net/en/Forums/Post/218618986?sort=0&page=0
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Hey man thanks so much! And I've been meaning to, I was just waiting until there was a little more meat. Just finished Chapter 10 tho so I'll def be taking your advice and creating a master post. This is my first time posting regularly in the forums, so just gotta figure out how to get it all linked up properly and it'll be good to go :) Thanks again for the reads and advice, if you see anything else that could use some fixing please let me know - any help is greatly appreciated!