The concepts are great!
I find Rall'org (sorry if I butchered that) a bit too strong. Able to control time and Darkness itself? Just a bit much. Other than that, impressive.
[spoiler]I'm surprised people are taking to this so well. I made a Hive raid play-by-play. Got ripped apart for being Hive. Lol[/spoiler]
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Yeah I agree that I've made his power too strong, I'm going to change that eventually. Thanks for the feedback!