[spoiler]give me more content in your posts please. I wrote a book and I expect more than a sentence if you want my full attention. I'll make it worth your while, just take the initiative and run with it. You can create sections up ahead too, I'm making it all up as I go. If you'd do the same it could get really interesting and get the attention of others. While you're writing, think about what it looks like, feels like, sounds like, include sensory detail so you're readers can see what you're describing in your head. Or do you prefer short posts? I prefer detail lol I'm going to jack your character to show you what I mean, don't worry it's temporary.[/spoiler] [b][i]As you descend down the stairs, a gusty breeze picks up dust and a fine layer of black sand around you, spinning it around haphazardly and forming random shapes. It appears to briefly form that same face you saw in the portal previously, or are you just seeing things? You continue for quite some time before reaching the half way point.. But you believe you can see the bottom. The chamber is large like some great canyon. You see half buried tomb stones and larger memorial crypts, they're covered by great dunes of black sands. You see the top of a door frame, sand blocking the door and obscuring what lies behind. As you get lower and lower, the air gets hotter and hotter.. And this place doesn't look anything like what should be in a starship. [/i][/b]