Ok so i watched your Epic iron banner vid. Heres my feedback - firstly your intro seems outdated. Need to up your graphic design skills or get someone to make one for you that looks sharper. the gameplay is ok but just seems like sniper headshots and super sprees which pretty much any player can achieve. The music choice is average/annoying. The damn Daniel sound byte even more so. There is no commentary. Most popular youtubers have 1 thing that sets them apart from the bunch -they might be amazingly skilled, they be a nice person..they might be really funny or they might be a talented editor. Find your one thing (definitely not the damn daniel thing) and put some personality into your videos. Keep at it and goodluck. Refer to true vanguard for inspiration ;)