This is fantastic. It should be a comic series or something. I'd buy the -blam!- out of it. Your writing/imagination in this is excellent. Keep it up. Also, some romantic tension between Flint and Strike would be cool. Like Flint crushing and Strike not even noticing. And maybe something with Blades and Nightly too. Just my derpy opinion. Ignore me if you want, you're definitely doing just fine without any help.