This is fantastic. It should be a comic series or something. I'd buy the -blam!- out of it. Your writing/imagination in this is excellent. Keep it up.
Also, some romantic tension between Flint and Strike would be cool. Like Flint crushing and Strike not even noticing.
And maybe something with Blades and Nightly too.
Just my derpy opinion. Ignore me if you want, you're definitely doing just fine without any help.
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Thanks! :) No, I definitely appreciate the help. It's probably the best way I can improve on the writing/story. As for romance, Nightly is in a romance... Just not with anyone in [i]Tower High[/i]. You'll see what I mean ;)
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Okay then.. I'll wait and see. But Flint though.. I main a Gunslinger so Flint has to come out on top lol..
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Lol don't worry, he'll get his moments
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Can't wait to read it..