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Destiny

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Edited by Agent NovaScotia: 10/16/2015 10:35:04 AM
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Chapter 5 (memories)

this chapter skips time a lot so when you see a _____ after a line it means a time difference. Charlie could remember the day he died vividly. He was one of the settlers on Venus, one of the first to come. He was 13 when he came on the colony ship to go. The traveler was there since he was born. "All colonist board your ships." Droned a voice over a speaker in the subway-style boarding station for the colony ship, "The Dryad" heading to Venus to start a new life. "Blah blah blah," his best friend Jake said plugging his nose to mimic the intercom speaker. "Pfft" Charlie laughed at his friends imitation as they both boarded the ship. "10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, lift off" said the captain from mission control. The ship roared towards Venus, seemingly eager to leave Earth on a new adventure. _______________________________________________ "Beep Beep Beep, system ALARM Beep Beep Beep, system ALARM," was blared from every speaker when the first ships came in, shooting innocence, and dropping four armed aliens to the ground. "The hell are these things?!" Jake said, panicking as he shot at one with his A-234 semi auto shotgun he had gotten 15 years ago. "I don't I know and I don't think you should care, just blast 'em to kingdom come." Charlie said killing one. "We should head to the sewers! They haven't seemed to find them yet, and then we could head back to earth!" "Definitely," Jake agreed. _______________________________________________ "I can't believe we survived the ships crash!" Charlie said, thankful for his life. "Let's get going." A fallen captain snuck up behind Charlie and shot him, killing him. Jake spun around and was able to note the enemy, the loss of his friend, and be able to run away. Jake ran all the way to the wall, and was able to crawl through the air ducts inside to get to the last city, all the while remembering his fallen friend. Once inside the tower he saw a little orb that was following him around. "Can I help you?" He asked the little orb. "Well, now that you mention it, I need a guardian, my purpose was to find a suitable person to help protect the people of the tower. And you look like the type." The orb said. "Well, I'm honored by this, but I barely survived myself, how can I protect people if I can barely stay alive? Also what is your name? I'm Jake." Asked Jake. "My name is Fury, and I cans answer your questions, you can protect people of you let me be your ghost, you cans fight and I'll be there to revive you if you die. If you are going to help anthem you need armor. So, are you in?" Asked Fury. "Sure. And will all people who died be to reincarnated?" Asked Jake hoping his friend could walk the earth once more. "Well, only the pure of heart can be, so if your friend Charlie was pure of heart and selfless, then yeah, he will probably become a guardian." Answered Fury. "Ok, where do I get my armor?" Asked Jake "I'll just make it for you," said his ghost buzzing while he gathered supplies to build armor. "And what about a weapon, because I couldn't bear to part with my A-234 semi auto shotgun." Said Jake. "Lemme see that," said Fury, hovering over the shotgun, and shooting beams of light into it. "Here, now it can kill these aliens, now your set." "Wonderful!" said Jake, and with that he spotted on the ground, an old knife. When he picket it up it glowed blue and crackled with energy, showing that he was a blade dancer. _______________________________________________ Jake told Charlie all the things that happened between him dying, and them meeting again. Then Charlie invited Jake into their fire team, promising him the fourth bedroom. Jake accepted the invitation and was introduced to the team. Walking into his room, Jake put the shotgun on a shelf and plopped down, and fell asleep instantly. Had to add another character, the next chapter might have even another person added, or not. Nothing is certain. Index: https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/159707322/0/0

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  • Awsome, another great story! The only thing about this one is that in the second paragraph, it's a lottle hard to understand what's going on. A little more detail about what's happening there could help. Other than that, grest job and I can't wait to read the next one!

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