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Edited by Miofwin:
9/24/2015 10:19:45 PM
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He calls others plebs but capitalises every word and has terrible sentence structure as well as spelling. Okay.
When I kill someone with my Hammer of Sol it's because they've just been running around with shotguns. We can't easily kill snipers as they can dodge our hammers easily and so can cautious, skilled, players.
Stop being a shotty scrub and you wouldn't get killed as often.
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Wow, only a pleb would post what you just wrote.
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I hate it when people judge someone else's grammar, and the person judging the grammar makes of tons of mistakes.
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Please, feel free to correct me.
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Edited by Show me potato salad: 9/25/2015 1:45:24 AMOriginal: He calls others plebs but capitalises every word and has terrible sentence structure as well as spelling. Okay. When I kill someone with my Hammer of Sol it's because they've just been running around with shotguns. We can't easily kill snipers as they can dodge our hammers easily and so can cautious, skilled, players. Stop being a shotty scrub and you wouldn't get killed as often. Corrected: He calls others plebs but capitalises every word and has terrible sentence structure as well as spelling. Okay. When I kill someone with my Hammer of Sol[b],[/b] it's because they've just been running around with shotguns. We can't easily kill snipers as they can dodge our hammers easily and so can cautious, skilled players. Stop being a shotty scrub[b],[/b] and you wouldn't get killed as often. I bolded the few things you should have put in your sentences. It wasn't terrible, but you shouldn't go criticizing someone else's grammar unless your's is damn perfect.
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Your corrections where worse than his original statement bro.
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Edited by Show me potato salad: 9/25/2015 1:43:53 AMThis is coming from a person who doesn't know the difference between the words "were" and "where." I will take my completion of the highest University level grammar course you can get- the highest in the country, actually, over your criticisms on my grammar which you obviously know nothing about, [i]bro. [/i]
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Yet I'm not pretending to be an ass who thinks I know everything. Quit forgetting you aren't perfect.
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I'm not, but if someone insults me like you just did, I'm not just gonna stand back and say "you're right. My grammar is terrible!" The only reason I confronted him in the first place was because he was being a jerk to the OP about his grammar. I just wanted to show him what it was like. He was even the one who told me to correct him, so I did.
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And you failed to do so. I never said I was an ivory league grammar [url=http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Godwin%27s_law]-godwinslaw!-[/url], so my grammar can be shit. Yours is shit, and you act like an ivory league grammar [url=http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Godwin%27s_law]-godwinslaw!-[/url]. Good day sir joke! Haha
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Edited by Show me potato salad: 9/25/2015 1:57:38 AMOkay, correct what I did wrong if you think you're so great at grammar. Then I can tear you apart and tell you word-for-word on why you're wrong. :) I proofread University papers as a job, so you're going to have a hard time convincing me that I am wrong. Do you know what prepositional phrases are? Do you know what commas [i]actually[/i] do and when they are needed? Do you know when to use a comma after a prepositional or introductory phrase? Please read the Gregg Reference Manual when correcting my grammar as well to make sure that everything is correct. I'm sure you have one of those, right? Do you even know what it is? You probably don't without googling it.
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Edited by Bilbosbagskin: 9/24/2015 11:45:05 PMThis stuff is soooo poopie!
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Are you British?
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Yes, why?
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Because the only grammar mistake I could think he is thinking of is capitalise (capitalize in America) but I don't see any grammar mistakes. The other guy is just being petty.
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He's missing a few commas and apostrophes. My knit picking is in mocking reflection of his post. I think I was too subtle with my humour though.
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You're really making me laugh now. What commas am I missing??? Lol. You should go to bed. I'm sure you need to get up for high school tomorrow.
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I was referring to OP, actually. But please, jump to more conclusions.
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I will. Please, make more grammar mistakes. ;)
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No, he missed commas in his sentence structure, and there is also one too many commas in "cautious, skilled, players."
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Edited by Miofwin: 9/25/2015 12:13:26 PMThat's an oxford comma. If your job is to proof read university papers and you completed a highest level university course in grammar, you should of recognised that. Now stop getting so triggered by everyone.
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It is an Oxford comma; I'm saying that you used one too many. It should be "cautious, skilled players." It shouldn't be "cautious, skilled, players." When you put it like that, you're separating your adjectives from the noun you're describing. In this case, the noun is "players." You wouldn't say "Those are some skilled, players." You would take out the comma. When you're listing more than one adjective, you do have to use commas for listing purposes, but the last adjective describing the noun never has a comma after it.
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Okay. Fair enough.
