I didn't read the entire thing because it wasn't written well enough for me to stay interested.
Religion is dumb. End of story.
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Ignorant atheist strikes again. Too lazy to know about religion yet claims its dumb.
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Religion, like political parties, draws lines in the sand and alienates others who don't have the same beliefs. I find this excessively stupid. Goodbye sad, retarded person who can only see the world in black and white. Allow me to pray to satan for your soul. Hue [spoiler]muted[/spoiler]
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Did I not just say that it's not yet finished? NOTE my NOTES. And you probably stopped reading because of the fact that it was TL so u DR.
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It actually wasn't written that well. That's why I didn't read it. It is full of grammatical errors like that bible thing all you sheep masterbate to AND it is severely lacking in the literary devices category.
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I did a bit of rewording. Does it seem better?
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It's better but you still have huge logical fallacies. One really can't source himself or herself unless you're writing an autobiography. Just because they say they are endowed with the Holy Spirit doesn't mean a whole lot. Are we sure Moses not only saw the burning bush, but smoked it as well? I bet he did and I bet it's in the omitted version