originally posted in:The Black Garden
Hey guys, this is my first time trying to write a short work of fan fiction. Please feel free to constructively criticize my work.
I hope you all like it, and I welcome you to the Boomslang Chronicles.
This piece is only serving as the prologue to get you all interested in the story and let you get to know the characters, hopefully I'll be able to post chapter one soon after this.
Edit: The link should work now
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it's a bit choppy and lacking of detail but it shows some promise if you polish it up.