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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by Solis Argentum:
5/5/2013 11:02:13 PM
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The Conquest of Spaces (Chapter 01)
Hey everyone, back again with another story. Didn't see my other one yet? Check out [url=http://www.bungie.net/en-us/Groups/Post?id=60301419&groupId=39972] Initium [/url].
This story will take place mostly from the eyes of an unknown Fallen prisoner. At the moment I've currently got 5 chapters established, and I will post them in the following days. For now, enjoy the starting chapter, [url=https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VwdCAmK8DbO1Lv2VJkLcdhvzVEXkW2dCYQZ4wgbkXCw/edit] The Prisoner! [/url]
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1 ReplyGreat atmosphere, and I like the twist about the prisoner. But, I think you are taking a little too many creative freedoms with the races. For one, I don't share the thought that the Hive are conscience beings. They look more like space zombies to me. Otherwise, good reading. nice and short.
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1 Replyis it named after the woodkid song?
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1 ReplyGreat piece! I'm really looking forward to the next installment. :D
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1 Replyoooohhhh sooo good. I read a lot of good stories on this site, but yours stands out man. So much depth added.
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