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I've decided to introduce may character in an assessment report from one of his superiors, I've never tried this before so its going to be a little odd for me. As always criticism is always appreciated as well as compliments. Name: "Hatter" Class: Warlock Race: Exo Quite the unusual character this... "Hatter"... The first of his traits that I noticed was his silence, he seems to have poor communication skills. Either he has non or if he just neglects them, it's beyond me. On the contrary to what I originally assumed, he was very obedient during the simulation, followed every order. He seemed to favor the shotgun, maybe a little too much for his own good. Even when the contacts were obviously out of range he seemed to refuse the use of his rifle. Something else I was worried about during the combat sim was what seemed to be a twitch or a tick. After the official assessment I sat down to talk with the engineers that had made the repairs on Hatter. Naturally my first question referred to his communication skills, they had told me that he was built during the golden age but was forced into a total shutdown due to the lack of maintenance. The engineers told me how they had to replace almost every part with a near exact replica. When they began work on the brain they were able to fix most of the problems but were unable to correct his psychological difficulties which would explain the twitch and the silence. Later that day I called the Exo into my office for an interview, my first question was about his first memory. His behavior was odd at first, he wasn't nervous, he wasn't excited, he seemed distant as if he were locked in his own thoughts. When his attention was drawn back to my question he only answered with one word, "waking" After a few moments of thinking he continued, "It was dark, I searched for something that could work as a light source but when I found a switch it wouldn't budge." He took a couple more moments to think, "I struggled with the lever for a little longer before someone else came to help." He snickered "When we finally moved the damn thing the lights came on one by one and it was then that we first realized we weren't human." "You didn't know?" "No." That last word echoed in my mind, he said it with such a powerful tone, sadness without sorrow. We sat there a while without any words exchanged. He didn't like the quiet, I saw it in his face. So he broke through the powerful silence, "I may not be human on the outside, but I can feel... I can think... I know I'm human, somewhere." He returned to my question, "After we left the warehouse the first thing I saw was a giant sphere, hovering over the surface of the earth. I couldn't help but feel responsible for it, I felt I needed to protect it." "So that's why you came here?" "Yes, I think it played a part in reviving me and my friend. I will protect the sphere and the city beneath it with my life." The interview was basically over at that point, all I needed was his loyalty, to be sure he was a soldier. So I dismissed him and immediately began filling out the papers, and as I write this assessment I have no doubt in my mind that that boy will make a fine guardian. Again complements and criticism are appreciated

Pvt. Kohl Lazareth Human Hunter Current Squad: n/a Kohl joined the Guardians because he felt he had to prove something, also because he felt he needed to protect his beloved mother and younger brother whom have always led him on the right path. Sadly his father died when he was of an age to young to remember for himself, but from what he's been told he died of an honorable death, he stayed back during a mission to hold the only exit for his fellow squad mates.

Wow! So many great stories!!!!:) yours too colonel!!!!

Name:The silent One Race:exo Class:Titan Planet of Origen:mars Faction:dead orbit. Origen story A long time ago, during mars golden age, there was much activity and happiness, however the silent one never showed emotions, never showed any type of happiness,remorse, anything. Created as a defective exo, he was banished for being incomplete, since a voice box was never installed, making him mute for life. He only had one function that he knew what to do:protect. When the cabal invaded, and destroyed much of the city of mars,they killed the silent one, and threw his dead corpse in an escape pod towards earth. The pod crashed in the ruins of Chicago, where a human fire team found his corpse and rescued him, and brought the corpse to the last city to be rebuilt. Now he is in all guardians debt. And helps all who are in need. He vows to one day take his revenge on the cabal, and retrieve a lost item of his: the hand cannon known as thorn.

Don't know how this works so here goes: Jason Steven "Rojo" Wayne Human Hunter (Don't know how ranking is) His father was a Guardian squad leader. On a routine patrol his entire squad was slaughtered and he fell into a state of depression eventually killing himself and leaving young Jason an orphan as his mother died during childbirth. He had to steal to survive. One day he tried to steal from the wrong person (a high ranking Guardian) and was thrown into the academy. A few years later he was sent out on a survival test with his partner; he felt like he was baby sitting him all the time. After 2 days of training he had different views about how to go about a situation and it turned into an argument then a fight, his partner winning. Jason left to continue to the rendezvous point. His partner on the other hand was attacked by 3 Fallen who were only equipped with swords. Jason returned to save his partner by pushing him out of the way of an incoming attack only to lose his left eye. (Jason brushed it off as only a flesh wound). His partner then killed the confused Fallen with a swift stab to the heart. After bandaging his eye Jason insisted on killing the rest. They did so with extreme team work and prejudice. Jason's loss of vision created a large blind spot, large enough that he couldn't see a piece of metal dislodge from the ruins above. His partner grabbed Jason and threw him out of the way only to be crushed to death by it. Jason is afraid to lose comrades and will even die to protect them but because of this he doesn't get to attached to things or people as he knows only the sorrow it will bring; he has a blind spot which is fatal although he has learnt how to make it smaller; his left eye can be used but after 20mins causes severe migraines and even begins to bleed profusely; he has recurring nightmares of his father and partners death. He is adept in CQC (he is renowned for breaking a Fallen Captains sword with only his finned (bladed) gauntlets and then proceeding to kill it with his bare hands) he is extremely agile being able to keep up with a Fallen Captain in hand to sword combat. He is extremely smart but too lazy to show it; he's laid-back and considers everything troublesome; sarcastic and an overall tease but he is still distant.

All of my characters info can be found in my short back ground story. to make a seven chapter story short though... Name: Daleros Alias: N/A (find out by reading his story) Gender: Male Class: Hunter Faction: Undecided Daleros grew up as the son of a middle class merchant. His brothers all died fighting for the last city except the first who got involved in bad business, and the last who followed his fathers footsteps. All his life he has read about heroes coming from the houses of great families or fighting their ways out of the slums of poverty. His goal in life is to prove that the people of the most over looked society can leave as much of an immortal mark on the world as others.

Name: Corsev Attaron Alias: N/A Gender: Male Race: Human Class: Warlock Faction: Seven Seraphs Long interested in the Travelers' mysterious powers, Corsev Attaron joined the Requiem Academy about 777 AGA (After Golden Age), and has since been acquainted with the abilities the Traveler has granted us. On the surface, there's nothing really remarkable about him. But, beneath the fancy Combat Robes and such lies a brave man who shows a deep sense of nobility and justice. He would do anything to protect his allies, whatever the cost. He still is learning how to truly master his powers, but with time... He could be one of greatest Guardians out there.

Name: Perdidit Viator Alias: Viit Race: Awoken Classification: Warlock Perditit, Perditit, inside the Tower all day Scribbling on Notepads and Whiteboards all hand writ illegibly Perditit, Perditit, stress on his mind gone astray No sleep for him, with his guild going down inevitably Viit, Viit, the adventurer of legends Stuck in the Citadel with friends frightened Viit, Viit, he watched his friends lives come to ends The lone escapee his mind deafened

Murph Rogath A friendly, religious warlock from the Last City. He was banished to the badlands of Mars after a squabble with a citadel official's son and has been there for almost 3 years. While trying to survive the harsh terrain of Mars he meets a village of Cabal Centurions and their families, who also happened to be exiles. Murph soon became became friends with the villagers and resumed warlock training with the the local shaman. Murph became a hardened survivalist among the dunes of the Martian Badlands and is the main character in my short story The Wandering Guardian. *taking some sweet time off before i make part 3. Stay tuned :)

William Aremos Human Titan Pheonix Clan Traits: -Old >Very sarcastic and humorous. >Natural leader. >On the DL. >Early 20's >Does not enjoy being put in front of large crowds. "Camera Shy" -Current >Battle Hardened >Serious >Late 30's, Early 40's >Lone Wolf >Dislikes large operation that require work with others >Refuses to become too close with others due to... certain events EDIT: The Current traits are what is taking place now. The old traits are currently in my story, because it is a prequel.

_______________________________Guardian Profile Data_____________________________ Name: Ruseck “Rust” Proeliatoris Race: Exo Design Sex: Male S/N: 07113 Creation Date: 30th Aug. 2694 Specialization (Class): Titan Service: Army of the Last City <113th Exercitus Legio -EOD <3rd Praetorius Contubernium* -Operator Rank: Sergeant OR-5 (NATO Code) Diagnostics Profile: This Exo Unit>07113 has been fitted with the personality matrix and certain memory functions of a 21st Century Special Forces soldier for its combatant, psychological, and physical parameters. Its combative efficiency is remarkable and adaptability in environments soars beyond predicted capabilities. The Humanity Life Spark resembles almost the exact of an organic human minus the variations we designed the Exo units with; “he” has taken to calling himself “Rust”, I understand why this would be ironic with the Exo Units. Will keep further progress update on Exo Unit>07113, but overall status is Successful. -TERRA 245th Science Division “Project: Mortalis Defensor” 0815 By:RUSECK7113 ______________________________________________________________________________