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originally posted in:The Black Garden
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Edited by The old North:
2/6/2014 2:55:19 PM
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Destiny: Days without sun.
This story didn't seem to be getting much feedback so I thought I'd change the layout. an exert can be found onsite to read more easily now. the whole story (including other chapters) can still be found in the google doc's link.
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1 ReplyGreat Stuff, really enjoyable reading! The characters are well defined, I like the short cuts in narrative as well. As Old Mali said previously, could do with some proof-reading.
