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originally posted in:The Black Garden
4/20/2013 1:03:33 AM
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My Destiny Part 4

part four is up everyone. Hope you enjoy

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  • Edited by cB557: 4/20/2013 3:12:19 PM
    Page nine, end of the third full paragraph. Did "waist" instead of "waste". You continue to churn out high quality work. Damnit, I hate when scientists are assholes. Start of page 11. "Led" instead of "lead". Another solid story. I think the sgt may be a bit too special for the narrative's good though.

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