House of Wolves, Full Raid Idea

This is my own kinda custom raid You start out on earth (i know the raid would be in the reef but this is my idea) and you see cracks in the earth and then dregs flood out of the cracks and attack you, you need to kill the dregs and shoot the floor at the same time, the floor has a lot of health but it will go fast if you focus all your fire on it, once you drained the floor of its health, it all falls down and makes a really big hole that you need to jump it. Once in you find a cave full of hive (you are still making your way to the raid area) you need to kill them and push foward, some shriekers will appear but you just need to kill them, as you go forward you begin to see some fallen fight the hive, just kill them and then you make your way to an exit to the real raid room, its a hole and once you jump down. The real raid begins. Ok so once your down in to the room, there is a pillar and a fallen boss on the top with a shield that can not be destroyed, the shield looks like a titan shield expect blue and it looks like it has blue thunder around it. His name is Vlaxor, The Fearce. He is the raid boss but you need to get rid of his shield, he can shoot you but you cant shoot him, he uses a powerful sniper but it takes a little bit for him to charge it, its not a one hit kill but it does do a lot of damage. There are to rooms on each side and each of them is a hall way and fallen Captains and Vandals will come out of a "cave" under the room and jump up, there is a servitor at the end of the hallway but they look different, they are bigger and are red instead, they are called "The Immortal Healers" if the fallen get to that they will pray to it and the more fallen that pray, the more it glows, if it glows enough you will get an effect called "Unholy Health" which means if anything hits you at all, your dead so you probably will all die. 1 person needs to go on the left, the other goes on the right so they both can hold off the fallen. the other four need to deal with Vlaxors summonings, he summons mechanical enemies so which means, Pikes and Devil walkers. First 5 pikes teleport to the arena and try to kill you, they are yellow health bars with shields, take cover and kill them, if you shoot off all the fallen, dont try to get on, Vlaxor will make them all be destroyed. You need to do that 4 waves hut 1 pike gets added everytime. Once the pike waves are over, you see an explosion in the roof and a devil walker comes out and its got a shield, its a weak shield but if you dont shoot at it for 4 seconds it goes up fast, the "Immortal Healers" are not longer able to create the "Unholy Health" effect but they come down to the battlefield and levitate around the walker, they are still immortal but they can shoot and you so just focus on the walker. The shield is weak but it does have a lot of health but since you 6 people it should be fine. Once the Walker is destroyed the Immortal healers just faze away. Now for the boss fight, Vlaxors shield goes down and he jumps at the wall and sticks on it and shoots and you with its sniper but he can be hurt but it will like nothing at all. As that happens, fallen will come out of the cave and attack you, the yellow health sniper vandals go to the area where the immortal healers were and shoot at you so someone should take care of them. Then a vandal with a spear ( like from when you meet the queen and she has those guards) The spear is the relic. It has around the health of a sword bearer from the Dark below. Once you kill it and get the spear you have some good attacks, one is where you stab, the other is where you hit and another is a ground slam. You also have a super attack which is used to damage Vlaxor. The super is where you throw the spear with a powerful super. You use this super against Vlaxor by throw it at him while hes on the walls. Hitting him will do 1/5 of damage to him so you need to do that 4 more times. But on the 4th wave, the Immortal Healers faze back in, they just teleported away, they were never dead, they float around Vlaxor and you need to use the spears super to take them out, it will be a one hit kill for you if you hit the healers, if you hit Vlaxor the Healers will shine and you will get the Unholy Health effect and fallen will keep on attacking you. You need to taken them both out and then take on Vlaxor. Once he is dead you will get some rewards. The fallen retreat back into the caves like a bitch and now its time to move on. The caves where the fallen were coming out has a big gassy explosion, gray gas just explodes out of it and then the place inside it because clear and you can walk in it, you go forward and no fallen attack you at this moment but as you go you make away to a a long, wide and tall hallway, you find some golden pikes, these pikes dont get destroyed so easily and they can levitate. you need to get on one of them and go forward, if you try to walk the ground will break and you will fall but since these Pikes can levitate stronger then another pike, the hallway is really long and there are many rocks in the way so you just need to go past them, fallen will attack you with normal pikes so your team needs to kill them to survive, after a little bit one golden pike enemy comes and its like a small mini boss so you need to kill it to, once its dead your very close to the boss room. Your at a ledge and you need to get off the pike now. The rocks brake and crumble and you fall down the ledge, your finally at the boss room and its gonna be a hell of a fight. There will be 10 yellow health bar captains and 15 vandal snipers you need to kill. Once they are dead a servitor blasts out of the ground and it likes the Immortal Healers but it has cracks all around it, its called the "Broken Healer" It flashes and glows at certain times, it shoots a ray and if it hits you you get "Unholy Health" but it has to have the beam on you for you to get it so if you have cover and your far away from it, killing it will not be a problem, oh and you can kill it cause its Broken. Ok now for the final boss, Oaxis, The Final, it looks like the one from the cover of the house of wolves cover. Its weapon is a big spear that shoots lighting out of it and it has a one hit kill melee attack. Ok time for the fight. Fallen will flood in and you need to keep fighting them, occasionally Oaxis shoots lighting into a crystal in the sealing and if he does that for 7 seconds, everyone in the room dies because it electrocutes all the Guardians. When he does this, you need to shoot him to distract him, it doesnt hurt him but it stops him from killing you all. 1 person needs to go on each side and keep the fallen from sealing away the Spear Vandal, both Guardians need to be on the plate at the same time for 10 seconds so the spear vandal comes out. After the guardians lure the Spear Vandal out, you need to kill it and use the spear relics super on Oaxis, once you hit him, he falls down and you need to shoot him until his shield regens and he coms back up, once he ups, he shoot at the crystal so shoot at him before he kills you all. Repeat this until you kill Oaxis and you get your rewards :D. Hope you liked my raid, tell me any suggestions or problems or what you thought it :D