I really like this! It actually reads like a grimoire card due to the first-person narrative. I reads very well, and it had some very good moments. I don't know if you've checked out my work before, but if you want, here's a link to one of my stories. See if you like it. We writers have to stick together! ;) http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/90052905?lc=1033
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Thanks for the feedback---I could tell you were a writer just by the nature of your comment man! Tell me something with substance haha---the tone is weirdly hard to nail down in this game, no? Cool when it works though. Glad it seemed like a Grimoire card. You can find more of my stuff by searching #VAL or #Ricochet. Dogs of War and Angel are very Grimoire-ish, so you might enjoy those. And hell yes I'm going to read yours ASAP!