When I saw your third paragraph started with "before I begin" I quit reading.
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And? Your point?
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My point is that your post is way too long. Your third paragraph should be conclusion, not prologue.
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It's a critique. It's supposed to be that long.
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The point is don't start like that, starting like that makes you sound like a huge tool.
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Except that it's important that I have the caveat there. Seems mostly everyone else understands that, except you two.