I have an new Expansion idea to take to the Dev team, DeeJ (Part 1 ):
DLC / Expansion Idea: The Teumessian Fox
Story:
As Darkness draws even closer and the news of Guardians of Europa have already reported Contact of Dark Forces dwelling there and Rasputin is doing everything he can to hold the Darkness back and all attempts are failing.
The Speaker calls for emergency meeting with the vanguard and their best Guardians. Hours past and nobody had even the slightest clue on how to stop the darkness till The Stranger arrived. She spoke of a set of relics which could help hold the darkness back long enough. The stranger spoke of the relics being in the hands of a set of Dark leaders.
Though concerning, she spoke that these Leaders are currently fighting each other for the darkness’s favour and it was an Opportunity to shift the balance while they are at it.
She didn’t have time to explain where to look exactly but before she vanished, she spoke of finding her Friend in London: “The Teumessian Fox” – A mysterious Assassin who is no friend of either The Traveller or the Queen of the Reef but as Times grow desperate.... Alliances need to be forged.
You will need to seek out This Assassin and convince him to join you against the Darkness....But be prepared for the revelations of truth; you will find when you do.
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The Map:
London: (Hive/ Cabal / Fallen/Darkness)
Once Home of Traveller Politics but was destroyed during the Collapse by Fallen...Now it’s just radioactive wasteland. Shattered parts of London are still safe to explore and now houses some of toughest Enemies you yet to encounter. Explore the streets of the ruin or dwell below into its tunnels. Those who far brave enough can try to get past the iron curtain but none except 1 has returned alive to speak about the Presidium.
This Map is 3x bigger than old Russia so expect to a lot of travels on your sparrow as you avoid the cross fire of the residents who live there and sudden radioactive storms which will force you into cover - danger is everywhere.
Inspired by Halo 3: ODST, where players can either sneak around London or go on a full assault for honour or glory
Mars: Eos Chasm (Vex /Cabal / Fallen/Bandits)
The place the traveller once rested before Humanity discovered it..... Now the Vex has claimed it and now the grid domains there. Everywhere nearby is just a rusting wasteland with danger and loot everywhere - A haven for criminals and scavengers alike.
The only “Civilised” place is Crime haven but only the desperate and fools go there. 3x times bigger than mars colony with sand storms which blind players and swallow pits that can consume unwary players.
Inspired by Rage
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The Locations:
London:
The Presidium: A massive Royal cruiser of the Cabal Empire. Floating above a supply gravity lift in the area of Westminster abbey, T’cun over sees all operations beyond the iron curtain. Whoever controls the presidium...controls the city
The Iron Curtain: a Cabal Defence line, housing an army of The Empire’s most loyal soldiers... not to mention alot of Goliath tanks, spectres and AA-turrets. Only 1 person has managed to sneak through their lines. You are going to have to earn his trust if you are to learn his secret.
The Ruin: the shattered remains of the West-end...now it’s just a battle ground between The Hive and The Fallen who live there. There are rumours of things far worse than the live that dwell deeper below
The Fox Hole: An old train-station and Home of the resistance, Led By “The Fox”. This Social area is only accessible from the ground to prevent cabal Spectres from finding it. Those who manage to survive the Ruin and reach the Fox Hole can find refugee. Here they can stock up supplies and weapons before venturing out into the wild. (Players will have to go into patrol and reach this location on foot to access it - However by completing the “The Teumessian fox” campaign, you will be able to access here by orbit)
The Crow’s Nest: once known as the Tower of London...now it’s an Observation Post which watches all operations that the Cabal might be up to beyond the iron curtain. Run by Eyeball (Fox’s Apprentice). Like the Fox Hole, it will offer a range of weapons and gear but you must travel on foot to get there. (Players will have to go into patrol and reach this location on foot to access it - However by completing the “The Teumessian fox” campaign, you will be able to access here by orbit)
Mars:
The Sea of Rust: Once a spaceport which connected ships to all the other planets. Now it’s just a scrap yard of all the ships that tried to flee the Darkness and failed. Who knows that remains there?
Ark fall: A strange Impact point just off the EOS chasm. Intel suggest it might be a fallen kell ship which had crashed in that area but scouts on the ground say it’s something different from what Intel suggest.
The grid: a maze made by the Vex to hide something. The Fox says that there is a Portal in there that links to the source of our Vex problem. If anyone can go in there and confirm this...good luck to you
Lost land: a wasteland that criminals and Fallen, alike call home. Expect to find run into trouble here but it’s the only way to reach Crime haven
Crime Haven: A social area that houses the scum of the solar system. Here players can seek out the black market or take their chances with The Fang. Here players can gamble to try and win exotic gear if they don’t wish to rely on Xur or RNG. But be warned...Fang doesn’t play fair.
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Part 2: The Characters / Vendors and Fractions
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/77214373
Part 3: Bosses and Enemies
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/77214422
part 4: Other
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/77214460
part 5: possible new Subclasses
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/72974009/0/0
part 6: New Exotic Weapon
https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/140804005/0/0/1
With this DLC, you would receive 2 Raids, 6 Strikes, 15 missions and 10 PVP maps
Thank you for reading my idea. Please feel free to leave a Like, vote and a comment.
Note: I will have pictures in links and put them in later
Note 07/11-2014: I have Updated the enemies page to help those who were wondering Why the Cabal Are on Earth. read and Enjoy
note 10/11/2014: will be changing the title to lure in DeeJ so act natural
Note 26/11/2014: Picture uploaded of what "Fox" Looks like. Inspired by Kitsune Lore. enjoy
note 16/08/2015: added new link page
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I enjoy that idea, that's the destiny we should of gotten. You have everything we would want from a game instead of this letdown that was thrown at us. While they were thinking they had it all. And it's true, they aren't going to read this idea if their lives depended on it, their to busy pissing us off with nerfs and enemy boosts and worthless exotics. Now I've played good games, Halo, Skyrim, GTA. They were wonderful games that have a wonderful story- background and they keep you pumped even after you've beaten it a hundred times over. They halfway, no they just threw destiny together and called it a masterpiece knowing it would be bought because of all the Bungie fans out there. The fans bought it off the shelves like a wild fire in a dry prairie. Only to be extinguished by a game with no lore, greedy and whining players who want everything nerfed in pvp ignorant of the effect/affect (I have problems with correct spelling) that it would have on most pve players who worked hard to get those guns only to have them nerfed because people who just got the game wanted to be more powerful than the people who actually worked for their glory. Right now YOUR DLC is what the game desperately needs if the game is going to ever see itself proclaimed a true masterpiece, hell, we have ships, why not pvp/pve orbit battles where we actually use those ships instead of just getting another ship to show off. Destiny will crumble unless the people up top decide to look at what really needs to be put in instead of only looping around in the sea of cry babies begging for nerfs then begging for boosts then be... You get it. All I'm saying is they didn't take into account people's greedy nature, they made a multiplayer game thinking the strong would help the poor, instead they only have the level 30s huddling together as if they would be executed if the dared to help a low level. And the low levels screaming at bungie to need the level 30s and boost them. Sorry about hopping all over the place, my mind races when I'm doing this sort of stuff and I go from one topic to the other in a blink of an eye. Here's my final statement, BUNGIE NEEDS TO PUT THIS IN FOR FREE AND QUICKLY OR THEY WILL SEE DESTINY JUST ANOTHER GAME IN THE WASTELAND OF FAILURE. Ps. Author, if you have a ps4 I would love to play together.
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u should somehow make it, and sell it back to bungie :)
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With all that content bungie would make u pay 60 to 100 bucks. 2 raids, blashemy. I like ur ideas but not gonna happen. There not gonna give us that much. I see how there gonna do us already.
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Amazing work dude, deej please read this amazing paper
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The only problem is this DLC has more content then the game itself! 😌
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Now i would just like to say, wow. That sounds incredibly well thought out and a lot of fun. If something like this was added to the game, I don't think there would be many more complaints (a few, but no where near as many). The storyline and map and everything sounds awesome. After this I'll be reading the other parts to it. It adds a lot to the game, making a lot of mystery to be solved and conquered. Definitely don't stop writing things like this man, as it's a very nice read and I can just imagine playing this. I look forward to other posts you make like this :)
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Why is it the really good posts like this NEVER get a comment from Bungie but someone posts stupid stuff and its Ill forward that to the dervs at the next meeting.
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Great idea
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I would buy that for more than 30$. That would actually be an expansion.
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#betterstorythandestiny
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I was going to ask if you work for bungie... But you don't, i figured it out because you wrote a coherent well thought out story.
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Glad to see this is still near the top of threads
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wow 600 likes so far. that went up quickly
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Why is there no "free expansion" option?
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Too bad Deej won't respond to this.
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Mixed feelings. Could be a great thing or could be room for more dreaded bugs due to extra stuff. I assure you the crossfire zones would become loot havens to start off and would be HEAVILY exploited upon being found. Now, once bugs were fixed- perfection! Also, why The Stranger? Let's call in someone new, a veteran from wars past who remembers someone from the battlefield that he befriended back then that still fights the darkness alone with no more official affiliation with the Traveler or the queen. So the veteran instead of The stranger and the old ally instead of an assassin. How does that sound Fox? What about everyone else?
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Fox. If you could just maybe have this idea implemented, just a maybe,,, who would you want to voice act the Fox? :)
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[i]Available Fall 2015 for $99.00[/i]
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Fox, you sound like someone I know, a former military man turned writer, just checking to see if you are one and the same?
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i do not want to give bungie more money threw dlc. i want the other 80% of destiny i all ready fukn payed for. why would you give lier more money ? you should not.
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Come on now Deej, least you could do is read this man's well thought out plan that would revive Destiny, and maybe even make people come back.
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Edited by badcnt: 11/7/2014 2:12:00 PMBUMP! Dare you to respond DEEJ!
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You've put more thought into the story than the whole of Bungie
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