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some shitty folk songs about my ex, all the song titles are places where, me, her, and my buddies(who are now long gone), would get drunk and hang out. tempe town lake is the last place me and my dad had a real genuine time with each other.
feedback would be appreciated, thanks to anyone who listens.
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lighten those strum patterns both in tempo and pressure. Too much twang from the strings not enough resonating sound. Plus for the proper folk feel (especially a song about an ex) I feel like you need to slow it up a bit.