Oh hey this got bumped, might as well post again I suppose.
I've had plague doctors on the mind as of late. I think the Scanner made it brighter than it actually is, but whatever.
I can see where more work could be needed, his arms are skimpy and the coat needs more shading.
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I see that you added some shading! My advice for this piece is to add more contrast. Make the shadows darker and the highlights not as frequent. (I know the struggle of bleaching scanners. A right problem but I believe in most scanners you can adjust the settings to tone down the light to not be so obnoxious)