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Well this is the first part of my story line that i just finished. Hope you all like it. I am open to criticism. It IS my first story, so don't blame me if it's bad. (I guess you technically can..since i did make it)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sx-y5hrCUqj2_emLFgF2DH0Wd1uuUCUa03mHEvE69bk/edit
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Hey this is really cool.. Although im not sure if its supposed to be a back-story for a character your going to be playing as. Which would kinda be impossible because you cant play a fallen. Maybe they could instead of laser blading you, do some weird stuff so you look like an Exo. :D nice job