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Edited by bigemaster:
2/2/2014 4:56:18 PM
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Amateur fantasy writer needs your opinion
So i just started on this little gig, hobby you could say writing fantasy stories. I've been doing it for many years, when i was bored or just needed a escape from reality.
So now i come with this world, called Suptopias. - Who contains dozens of realms as Gorthina, Surina, Wathril and more.
So im just gonna give it a shot really, take it or leave it. Give a cynical comment or some constructive advices of what i could do better beside the grammar errors. Thanks for reading this far though. I will drop the story as a second comment down below.
Cheers!
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3 RepliesConsidering you can't properly spell "dozens", I want one good reason why I should read it. But pre-emptively, I'm going to tell you it's shit. But that's a good thing. If you can write something shit, you can most likely write something good. The key, very honestly, is practice. You're better off reading a published author's advice regarding writing than any user here. You need to fix the grammar, first and foremost, and then you can read and reread it and decide for yourself what works and what doesn't. [spoiler]I will give it a read, and comment on it. [/spoiler]
