originally posted in:The Black Garden
your description is excellent and I like how you are able to have your character express what he is thinking. Maybe flesh it out more when you get the time for it.
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I tried to keep the essence of Destiny. The goal is to make your own path so I tried to leave that open by not necessarily laying out the story but just kind of taking it from the beginning and showing a hero who is just starting his "destiny" and is not yet sure what it holds.