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7/14/2013 3:48:52 AM
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It was approximately 340 words overall. I don't know how much leeway we have with the short stories, but I hope this is acceptable. I have cut hundreds of words from my original draft and condensed the material as best as I can and can't think of much more to remove from the story without compromising the mood and flow. If I need to cut it down a little more please let me know so I can try to edit out some pieces. Thanks for reading.
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