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originally posted in:The Black Garden
7/13/2013 7:05:52 PM
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we have that the traveler helped us in our hour of need, and that it is not inactive, we also know humanity had a strong civilization stretching several planets. We have heroes, and challenges, but no journey. we have nothing over the characters in that struggle, the characters now. All we have are OC's running around with guns and space magic. which would be great if we had a groups with whom we associate and intereact, but we don't have that. We have basic descriptions of enemy groups, basic soldiers and monsters for all we know. There is no antagonist, only obstacles. noone for the heroes to grow and face, to challenge. Only those with motives unclear, and to impose motives and characters on them would be premature in light of the veil of information approaching us. and besides, 300 words isn't long enough to make a GOOD story.
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