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I got enough positive feedback from the preview that I decided to finish it. Here it is! The beginning of Prosper.
And I'm bringing back the audience questions! Yay!
[spoiler]Do you like the intro?
Who was talking during the intro?
Do you like Kyjor?
Do you like Antom?
What's your opinion of Dartol?
Or Chenford?
What the hell happened in the Removement Chamber?
So Dartol's MIA...huh?
Chenford's mission tanked fast. What did you think happened?[/spoiler]
"Hurry, daddy. I want to see the Gaurdians."
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Just one thing... Did you spell it "Gaurdians" on purpose or was that just a constant mistake? That was the only thing that really bothered me lol but great read! :)